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Marvel Submission: ActionPage1 by ~ruddiger:iconruddiger:

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Submitted: June 9, 2008
File Size: 425 KB
Image Size: 425 KB
Resolution: 748×1129
Comments: 25
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1st page of an action sequence for a planned submission to Marvel and other companies...lemme know what you think!
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~VitoDGK:iconVitoDGK: Jun 9, 2008, 11:56:36 AM
looks great, no crits
~captivx:iconcaptivx: Jun 9, 2008, 12:33:27 PM
I like this a lot, the draftsmanship is lovely and the page on a technical level is fine. If I were to give a crit, it's that it took me a little while to tell that Spidey was hanging off of the glider, since he was so hard to see. Maybe a solution would be to give him a little bolder outline compared to the smoke since he gets a little too lost in it.

Good luck.
~ruddiger:iconruddiger: Jun 9, 2008, 12:36:30 PM
Thanks guys, to follow up, i likely will add one more page before this one to explain whats going on a little more, might try to make the required non action pages lead into this too.

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~gl4di4tor:icongl4di4tor: Jun 9, 2008, 6:54:44 PM
Looks great man, great page layout.
=vbc150:iconvbc150: Jun 9, 2008, 8:43:01 PM
About time you show the world this page.
~cheddarpaladin:iconcheddarpaladin: Jun 9, 2008, 9:23:29 PM
This epic needs to be colored so it may achieve it's peak of greatness.

It is beyond awesome.
:+fav:

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Leave luck to Heaven.
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*AlexDeB:iconAlexDeB: Jun 10, 2008, 5:32:30 AM
i'd by it! ^^

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COME see my work DAMNIT!!!

sadly Commisions are off again due to the insame amount of work I got here
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